Peer Assessment, Contents Page

 



At the finishing stages of the construction of my contents, I decided to collect feedback from a few friends incase any adjustments could be made. Here is what they had to say:

 



Jessica:

• A very good images. The models are dressed wellto suit the genre of the magazine.
• Good use of space and structure.
•  You can see where you have extracted elements from the front cover to the contents page such as the colours and the font styles.
• Love the way you have duplicated the 'Urban' title from your front cover and interpretted it into the contents page.

Zainab:

• Layout of the contents page is different from many other contents pages.
• could add a competition box or something more exciting at the bottom to draw the readers attention.
• All images are clear and look very professional.

Velina:

• The colours of the page all compliment eachother well.
• The models suite the genre
• Maybe you could change the glow of the 'This Week' to another effect that could potentially help emphasise the genre of the magazine.