Above I have chosen to do my peer assessment of my music magazine at its finishing stages in which I used well known social networks such as facebook to collect feedback on peoples views on the double page spread of my music magazine.
From this activity, I was able to collect a decent amount of comments all with very different views and tips on what they thought about my double page spread. On person mentioned how they thought the spread was very colour coordinates and that the image used was a clear representation of the genre of my magazine. I assumed they meant due to the posture, expression, direction of gaze and costume was what conveyed this. Another person also mentioned how the image was good but looked pixilated around the edges, in which I told them that due to the file being too big for facebook this caused the image to look undefined. Two other people mentioned how they liked the transpearent 'E' in the background of the text, in which I agreed as I thought this was one of the best aspects of my double page spread although the spelling within the actual content of the double page spread was said to need to be corrected and the way in which I phrases certain sentences.They also said that it's good that I have have followed all the conventions of a magazine, such as, page numbers, structure of paragraphs, website, ect.
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